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IELTS SCORE GUARANTEE PROGRAM

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发表于 2014-8-1 12:09 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Hi! My name is IELTS Ninja. As a private tutor, I have taught IELTS and SAT since 2011. Just graduated from UofA this summer and currently full-time employed by a company I love, in my spare time, I want to help you to pass the IELTS test, achieve the desired score, and advance your career. So here is my IELTS SCORE GUARANTEE PROGRAM: if you cannot pass the test with the score we agree on, it WOULD BE FREE OF CHARGE and all deposits will be completely refunded. 1 z  U9 r, {4 ]- w
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The program will run depend on your current skill level and score band. The advantage of this progame is that it is completely test driven, so there will be no long hours of talking nonsenses or frivolity. , d1 P1 X# ?3 S# Q2 B! `, \+ D

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ielts.hacker1@gmail.com
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 楼主| 发表于 2014-8-14 06:36 | 显示全部楼层
这里是谷歌和wordreference.com的结果
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发表于 2014-8-13 16:36 | 显示全部楼层
应该是 I have been tutoring IELTS and SAT since 2011; r. j: m- L" ]5 l0 x1 _
第二句话 应该加上主语 I just graduated from...
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既然选择了用 help sb. to do 的形式 应该保持一致。help you to pass, to achieve, and to advance (advance your career 这个用法貌似没听说过)) N  H) V" L  S8 B) P
if 后面多用虚拟语气 etc. If I were you....blablabla6 O3 E* f, r6 ^: @
所以这里应该用:if you could not achieve the score that we had an agreement on, it will be free of charge. 后面那句话就不用写了 已经free of charge 了。而且一句话里一会用would 一会用will..." O& K! p' I$ ]- y$ H
all questions are welcome 听起来怪怪的 if you have any question, please feel free to contact me at... or please do not hesitate to contact me at...5 Q' v7 g( D7 d! |; n5 ~2 N

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 楼主| 发表于 2014-8-13 23:06 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
谢谢你的观点。因为挑中午午餐break时间发的,没有复查。下次多注意。
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 楼主| 发表于 2014-8-27 17:06 | 显示全部楼层
非常感谢大家的关注!
6 [, p- c# w8 K3 X1 {截止目前,Ninja 一共有四位长线学员,仅有一位是中国同学。各种肤色从白到棕都有,所以课堂还是很多元的。
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从九月份起,为保证教学质量,以及更好的灌输Language immersion的IELTStology理念,所有在埃德蒙顿华人网录取的新学员将统一接受纯英文教学,Ninja将不再提供中文或中英文教学服务。9 _. n! I/ v9 C- ~! z( J' \4 D% u
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