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[求职信息] 提供写/改简历和COVER LETTER

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发表于 2013-4-15 18:28 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
帮朋友发帖子,提供简历和求知信的撰稿和修改。朋友母语是英文,有多年的人力支援招聘经历,还可以模拟面试。
6 i, A4 j+ `3 b 简历 60刀,提及此网站优惠10 元。
# W, P; d, T  Q" V- W求职信(COVER LETTER) 40 刀,提及此网站优惠10 元。( p  x0 l$ I" v6 d5 W
修改简历和求职信 50 刀。
' _8 K) a; B2 T$ D. K9 k* L) l3 a/ C另外,寻找工作质询和模拟面世50刀一小时 面对面会谈。
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发表于 2013-4-15 19:50 | 显示全部楼层
这是你的邮箱还是她的邮箱?
2 I: p* _/ Z1 S修改简历和求职信 一起算一共 50 刀?
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-4-26 15:36 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
是的,请直接发到resemedoktor@gmail.com,也可以代替申请工作。
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发表于 2013-5-8 19:32 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
你朋友是专业人力资源经理,还是有技术背景的经理?如果是西人,可能不懂中国人的文化,只是改改语法或者格式的话,会有多大帮助?
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发表于 2013-5-8 23:16 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
Interview guarantee ?  Or money back?( _9 e- g2 k. `4 d

' @9 U  L% w* [$ ^3 [9 w* o感觉背景很重要,不同背景的话,很难写出专业简历。
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-5-9 10:48 | 显示全部楼层
mont_hy 发表于 2013-5-8 20:32 ; g7 f: n6 x) |- e( C$ e7 @% v
你朋友是专业人力资源经理,还是有技术背景的经理?如果是西人,可能不懂中国人的文化,只是改改语法或者格 ...
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More important you understand Canadian culture, if you want a job.
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$ _0 V0 T4 b  p" Q+ lI have an HR background and understand Chinese culture.( b' x! G3 F. M" Y" [0 P0 Y

4 R  s2 A$ [( w( M. i$ xJust correcting grammar and syntax by doing spell check online is not going to work for you.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-5-9 17:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
lopenwing 发表于 2013-5-9 00:16 % o: @! v" {9 Q
Interview guarantee ?  Or money back?
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感觉背景很重要,不同背景的话,很难写出专业简历。

2 B6 d) g- y" y2 a7 F+ I$ `( C1 ?No one can give a guarantee...you know that.6 d& z% ]4 C2 q; m2 t1 U, p7 v4 s
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Back ground is in hiring.....I help kinds of people with technical and non technical background....makes no difference.
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发表于 2013-5-9 20:35 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 lopenwing 于 2013-5-9 20:38 编辑 9 `4 H+ R9 ?0 ]3 o4 {6 i3 X

" m3 x, v2 N0 e, P) U* t, jMy understanding, HR cannot make decision on hiring. HR only can make recommendation and excute what manager told to do.- x: U5 ?$ H6 U8 t9 P$ [
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How the résumé should be like, it depends on manager's favor, not the HR.
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: x0 ]+ ?# h' x" T  iThere are many ways to get interviews other than put focus on a resume. / B$ X, C7 m7 @+ ~) y5 F9 n2 R0 i; w

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Bluesky_AL  在2013-12-30 13:22  送朵鲜花  并说:我非常同意你的观点,送朵鲜花鼓励一下
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发表于 2013-5-9 20:57 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 lopenwing 于 2013-5-9 21:00 编辑
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I was  curious how a so called resume writer can write a better resume than myself, so I did a test. I already have a decent job with a top 3 oil company in canada, that's just a test.  I paid 300+ dollars on careerbuilder website for a résumé service. They are the top 1 resume writers in the market base on public suvey. They have certified professional résumé writers in all different displine to match your background.
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After 10+ time revision, it is still look like a garbage. 0 p& ^( e" r, t8 b

& t# x* l- L& i$ G+ y  SResume should come up by someone itself. The most important key to find a job is to know one person.  That is yourself.
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发表于 2013-5-9 21:11 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
我来说一句吧,我就是看到此广告,然后找S 帮我修改的简历,CV,并且做了一个多小时的电话面试。$ u- H% S8 N6 w7 N* j: H+ R9 Q9 ]
并且正好那几天有个面试,面试后,S 都会email 我询问面试的怎么样,很负责。
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, c5 z! k% |/ X2 i7 b2 q9 b' b% r, C' ]对于修改简历CV的问题,个人认为起码一份没有语病不累赘,通顺的简历不会第一眼就被刷掉。9 A# S% _% u/ n  K" d& n1 t% k
而模拟面试,可能我会提前想好答案,但是再英文语言组织上会不通顺,可能我想到很多方面,但是不知道该怎么去说,什么该说什么不该说。
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# M- H! O: U( z- k' L( [1 j. x我想这样服务,对于我这种刚毕业正在找工作的菜鸟,是很有帮助的,起码如果我有疑问,我能找到人及时咨询。我自己的 简历,在我拿去改之前也是我自己修改了一遍又一遍,我自己参照网上的样本,再一遍一遍思考我还想往上放什么才能体现我的价值。主体我自己确定了,但是我觉得有点乱,也怕有错误,所以才找人润色。/ r5 k; k5 ?0 u0 t7 S5 p0 A1 u9 A

9 o. U- c& ~5 S( V) z, w1 N也看了一下上面的疑问,说了一些心中的想法,可以肯定的是,S 是很认真的在帮着改,如果有人也想找他,不防在改之前先打电话交流一下,再做决定也不迟。
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-5-28 19:58 | 显示全部楼层
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-6-4 10:50 | 显示全部楼层
“All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them.”
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-6-14 15:59 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-6-25 11:32 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Google Street view of the worlds tallest building:8 x6 t) M6 b5 t# ~3 ~
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http://mashable.com/2013/06/24/t ... google-street-view/
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发表于 2013-7-1 21:03 | 显示全部楼层
价格你说的我好迷糊,,是resume加coverletter 加起来一共50还是?4 ?( E! h9 U+ Z7 B; b
单一改resume就60(可以-10) 单一改coverletter就40(-10)??
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-3 13:33 | 显示全部楼层
Cover Letter $40+ D; _# t" R; l; w0 s
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Resume $50
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I can help you if you have better success with your job search. I do more than simply edit or write a resume. I am a professional and have years of experience helping people find jobs.
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resumedoktor@gmail.com
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发表于 2013-7-3 18:20 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-8 21:27 | 显示全部楼层
up!!!
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-13 11:11 | 显示全部楼层
up up.....
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-27 12:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
up up..
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发表于 2013-7-27 14:23 | 显示全部楼层
https://alis.alberta.ca/ep/eps/hotline/resume.html  R9 p, v7 }7 a- i6 ?- _! k" h# C

1 V& K  \) ~  f/ E" wIts free on government site!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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曼联球迷  在2013-7-27 18:54  送朵鲜花  并说:我非常同意你的观点,送朵鲜花鼓励一下
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发表于 2013-7-27 18:53 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
SmartBrands 发表于 2013-7-27 15:23 0 B* H7 v8 N/ k! K9 c
https://alis.alberta.ca/ep/eps/hotline/resume.html; R2 Q/ T5 E# F, A3 i

0 L* n3 a4 e) ?Its free on government site!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...
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非常感谢,有这个了谁还花钱改简历
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-29 08:54 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
As long as your english and grammar are perfect, sure....you can write your own...Most people have difficulty with the content not the template.* w2 w; {2 S) I' {1 }& T; d4 f
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-29 08:55 | 显示全部楼层
3 WAYS TO BOOST YOUR CHANCES OF LANDING A JOB:
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' W! C5 p6 }1 {, E+ x. ]% K1. Plan What You Want To Do
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7 B- n3 ]0 W  C4 S; {% vThe first step is to sit down for a few hours and just think, think, and think. You need to think about you; forget about what your family wants you to do for the moment (don’t ignore advice), and ask yourself, “What do I want to do? What am I good at?” Draw up mind maps, do whatever you need to do to narrow down your job search into a few career paths.
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For example, if your hobby is photography, look into various photography jobs and career opportunities. Then get on the internet and do some thorough research into those chosen paths, note down any specific qualifications or skills needed, etc. If certain qualifications are required, you need to decide whether you want to steer clear or do what’s necessary to achieve them. You really need to be realistic with yourself here., J& X2 w4 l4 Z

& B& Y1 y9 V3 D+ K' `If you have next to nothing in terms of qualifications, you need to bear that in mind when thinking about which career paths to approach. Don’t put yourself down, just be realistic – it can save you a lot of time.- e# g+ X: K  K1 k: |+ a5 r
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More next time...
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-5 19:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
2. Searching For Vacancies
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% x2 R9 T6 g3 \( X( c7 yIn this day and age the first obvious step for many job seekers is to hop on the internet and browse job search websites. Some of the leading sites are great; over time they’ve developed efficiently and can match you up with suitable vacancies varying from accountancy jobs to tree surgeons. But, it’s not the only way to look for openings.
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  _) T0 T, y+ e+ O7 R$ F4 N+ f8 IAnother saying you may hear as a job seeker is, “it’s not what you know, it’s who you know.” This is a very true statement. You really need to get yourself out there and be as social as possible; having a big group of friends will without a doubt increase your chances of finding a job. Being a social person increases your confidence and interpersonal skills, this helps you meet new people and make new bonds.
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Lastly, “get on your bike” and go. Go to job centers and CV posting. Employers will look at you in a new light when they realize you’re making an effort and will brand you as a “get up and go person.” Plan where you want to go and think outside the box. Don’t just go to the shopping center, there are loads of places you can go.
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$ {' p* w# s, g* zGo back to your initial research and look into various companies accessible to you. Spend a week going around to these companies and you’ll increase your chances dramatically. By handing a CV over personally you have a much greater chance than someone who’s posted it online; you know they have it and have probably read it, whereas when you post it online you don’t know if they’ve even received it.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-15 11:14 | 显示全部楼层
3. Work On Self-Improvement$ ^" K) a9 Y' }% N: Q, Z& `
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This is a huge factor. Although it’s wrong to judge someone on appearance, a lot of employers do. Regarding appearance: It’s your ability to brush up and look professional and presentable. Here are some examples:
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It’s important you have a tidy suit. Suits aren’t cheap, but a well-fitted suit will impress any interviewer. Even if an interview requires you to wear casual wear, it’s still advised you turn up in a suit in order to sell yourself to the maximum.
3 ^3 d3 r: d- o$ uAs well as a suit, it’s important to take pride in your hair. Learn how to wear your hair in a professional manner. You don’t need to strip yourself of your personality, but try to keep yourself looking tidy and clean cut. Being scruffy will get you nowhere, unless you’re a genius.
  b4 j! \5 K2 e. B+ TWork on your vocabulary and interpersonal skills, too (i.e. your conversation ability, telephone manner and e-mail structure). Here are some examples:
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Get used to answering your phone promptly and avoid missing calls. You never know who it could be on the other end, if you’re applying for jobs regularly online you should have companies calling you at least three times a week. It’s important to have a pen and pad ready at all times to write down notes, for example addresses and interview times.0 ~! H% r0 I- j; A# ]! Q, a3 `
Practice speaking in a professional manner and try and make yourself sound happy, charismatic, and professional. Being sharp is good, if you mumble and stutter on the phone you’ll get nowhere. A tip that always works is to smile while you’re on the phone, this will increase your confidence and although the person on the other end cannot see you they will know you’re smiling and the conversation will be a lot easier and free flowing. If you’re not too confident as a person and you struggle with conversation, be as social as possible. Meet up with friends in your spare time and talk on the phone as much as possible.
9 D& U5 ?; j' v# ?- EYour e-mails are of great importance. It’s important to do some research to ensure your e-mails are structured correctly and formal. Always read over your message before you send it to ensure you don’t come across rude and to spot any silly spelling mistakes. With CV’s, take the same approach and get family/friends to check it and suggest improvements.
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发表于 2013-8-15 21:22 | 显示全部楼层
提个醒,在Alberta Works Centre 里面有个雇员专门就是帮助求职者修改简历和COVER LETTER 的, 全程免费, 还可以利用里面的电脑打印出来,上网找工作也行,停车除了DOWNTOWN都免费。我也是跑到HUMAN RESOURCE 那里,人家给指点到那里去的。6325 Gateway Boulevard里面有个叫 马微娜(MALAULA)的意大利美女,人特别好,抽空给重我写了简历,虽然这不是她的本职工作。
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Address:Argyll Centre; Z: X! s0 l, a/ j
6325 Gateway Boulevard
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Phone:780-644-2888 | LMIC 780-644-2827: [' [6 \! x+ [1 i  `  L" ?
TDD:780-427-1569
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Hours of Operation:Monday to Friday: 8:15 a.m. to 4:30 p.m.7 X3 p0 p4 W& n( s* `
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这样的Works Centre在爱城有5个,点击下面的链接自己找吧。- v' K; u' \4 t% Z$ @+ \
https://alis.alberta.ca/ep/eps/hotline/resume.html
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或者看看21楼的链接,也很好。
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-18 22:16 | 显示全部楼层
The last question an interviewer typically asks is “do you have any questions for me?” You should NEVER reply “no.” However, this is exactly what many people say because they’re not prepared even though they may have been asked this question numerous times before.
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Do you know what questions you shopuld be asking?
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-26 14:36 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
To make a good impression at an interview:
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During the interview, be tactful, courteous, sincere, polite and knowledgeable about the organization and what you have to offer it." j  A2 H. E0 c% Z4 @- I. i

; |6 s5 @4 Y9 t* o9 Q% lAlways send a follow-up thank you letter to the interviewer. Very important!
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-9-1 11:10 | 显示全部楼层
Frequently asked Question:
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% d) H! P% r2 T/ q( _) QDo Cover Letters matter?9 [2 ~7 W& _# E" U! [/ }. @& P

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, J3 Q+ L% J% d1 `! }- K7 }- OA good cover letter will make the recruiter read your resume. A bad letter will mean your resume and application may end up in being deleted!
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, }( E2 C/ j; c( @- `* B2 t6 }Good Luck!
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