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[经验感悟] 无偿修改简历

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发表于 2011-11-23 22:35 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
我的简历是在政府网站上递交,CAREER ADVISOR修改的,非常好,我强烈推荐. 6 J8 b! z! q/ v6 F5 R7 b0 c# [
在这里: https://alis.alberta.ca/js/eps/hotline/resume.html .
- ?% }6 r) _0 Z一步步来递交简历, 大约2周后EMAIL回复的.我的简历被修改得稀里花拉,而且还给我发了个RESUME TIPS. 因为工作性质,我接触大量的LEGAL文件,从这个角度看,修改后的简历还是非常规范地道实用.简历上红色的是他们帮助添加的内容,蓝色是提出的建议和问题. 磨刀不误砍柴功,大家试一试吧.% }& S* W% D0 P0 T0 h1 |/ s' G
我会把RESUME TIPS 发上来.修改的我的简历不好意思不发了. 找政府修改简历时我一直是有工作的,未雨绸缪一下,一旦失业用得上.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-11-23 22:37 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 trixie 于 2011-11-23 22:42 编辑
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& }6 h! b" [% h自己坐板凳. RESUME TIPS
$ K2 }' @6 \9 u- D8 tResumé Tips
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•        The purpose of a resumé is not to get you the job; the purpose of the résumé is to get you an interview
: w6 P  k+ e% M4 R•        A well-written resumé is an essential component of your job search. It serves as a marketing tool to make a positive first impression and for you to secure an interview.
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•        The average resumé is given 10 to 30 seconds to make an impression on the reader.; F$ Q$ N  i6 v1 P/ l" E8 `1 ^/ K

/ y5 j- M4 R8 Y+ `% j# X- C* [•        Resumés should be:
- O% i/ r; P0 \. d' b/ n7 Z# po        Short and easy to read ( 2-3 pages max)) W5 y0 x9 u  }* r) m$ s* \6 o8 d
o        Interesting to look at (not too crowded with information; have standard sized margins, not too large/small font, white spaces are allowed and actually increase readability)$ i" q; D$ o: |3 ^0 g$ z+ I
o        Is focused to match your career goal/job you are applying for) `# E6 {3 D% V) e" }# K4 y
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•        A resumé is a reflection of the individual who it belongs to, and there are many different ways to capture the information required. You are the expert on you; tailor your resumé to reflect your experience(s).# i' E" y6 X! G" \
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•        Resumés are organized into separate components. These components can be named by using different headings. All of these components should be in a resumé, if they are relevant to you.
5 w2 }' }# o& y7 z/ oo        Personal information: Name, address, postal code, telephone numbers, email. If you are posting your resume on-line you may wish to remove your street address to protect your privacy.
, E. F6 j) j* a" J: X7 ~, a2 _o        Objective: This component is optional. The objective is a short one or two line description of your career objective. It should focus on the type of position you are applying for.
( E" Z' @( D, Zo        Highlights of Qualifications:  This component is a short paragraph or bulleted list that catches the reader’s attention by highlighting your background and career accomplishments as they relate to the position you are applying for. This section is optional.
: M: }9 q9 c2 c/ K! _8 j( [  k6 Mo        Skills and Experiences: This component describes your skill sets or areas of expertise. Things that could be included in this section are: Communication Skills, People Skills, Computer Skills, Management Skills and Research Skills. Under each heading, include about 4 to 8 bullets listing your accomplishments to show your skills and areas of expertise.; q, @0 `) B+ S2 ~+ s
o        Education:  List your formal education most recent to least recent. If you have a degree, diploma or post secondary certificate it is not necessary to list your high school diploma, it is inferred. Include training that has been completed as well as training that is currently in progress
5 `; Y( D: g5 a: m! n+ ho         Employment History: List your title, company you worked for and the dates - dates should be on the right side of the page; they do not need to include months. If you are using a chronological format, list your accomplishments, responsibilities and duties in this area.
; I6 s! Z8 b5 p, h8 a: @o        Volunteer Activities/Community Involvement/Memberships/Professional Associations:  These components are optional.
- v8 i" V" ~; p2 p& b5 lo        References should not be included within the résumé.  The use of the phrase references available upon request is optional. It is assumed that everyone has references and that they will be provided when asked. The reference information should be typed neatly on a separate sheet and given to the employer which is usually requested at the end of the interview.: s: D2 P( N9 M% i" b+ a0 r. W

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•        Points to remember:
( a6 X; e: B: [( V6 Wo        Keep your resumé brief and relevant
% o, E, \: L5 ^. }1 {0 l: |o        Present yourself proactively and accurately
8 I6 T+ _2 L9 V9 a* I9 c7 T. @o        Use strong action verbs
' S- [/ P$ E, uo        Use the same tense throughout the entire resumé. When you’ve done something once, your experience is in the past, even if you will do it again tomorrow. Use the past tense to keep things consistent) o* j' P. s7 @! f9 R/ ?" f

7 s: g( C6 k. u9 M+ kThe Alberta Learning Information Service (ALIS) website has a great deal of information on resumé writing in the Tip of the Week archive -  http://alis.alberta.ca/ep/eps/tips/tips.html on the left side under Tips Search, search using resumé as the search term, for a list of  tips related to resumé writing.
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If you would like to take a workshop on resumé writing, please contact your local Alberta Employment, Immigration and Industry office. A list of all offices can be found on the ALIS website at http://alis.alberta.ca/ec/cp/cs/abcareer.html
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发表于 2011-11-23 23:02 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2011-11-24 21:19 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
刚才试发了一下,过两天告知结果。
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发表于 2011-11-24 21:19 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2011-11-25 00:14 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2011-12-6 09:53 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
顶,好贴。
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发表于 2011-12-17 17:54 | 显示全部楼层
非常感谢你的信息。这个网站真的很有用。现在修改简历的速度变慢了,有可能要等15个工作日。想修改的趁早。
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发表于 2011-12-17 18:38 | 显示全部楼层
wannahome 发表于 2011-12-17 17:54
: l2 ]% _' r1 F- V* L非常感谢你的信息。这个网站真的很有用。现在修改简历的速度变慢了,有可能要等15个工作日。想修改的趁早。 ...

' q/ p/ x& [* u  t我已经等一个月了,还没给我回邮件呢
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发表于 2011-12-18 08:35 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
敬佩楼主!
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发表于 2011-12-25 14:04 | 显示全部楼层
Nice!
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发表于 2012-1-3 21:18 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢..
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发表于 2012-1-4 13:22 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
好人啊
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发表于 2012-1-9 21:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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发表于 2012-1-16 11:14 | 显示全部楼层
非常感谢楼主的信息
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发表于 2012-1-16 14:49 | 显示全部楼层
trixie 发表于 2011-11-23 22:37
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+ N: W' w8 x  @) \It is very useful for write a good resume!3 ^* k1 b- n) g( T

( T8 R! \- O1 }Thanks!!!
老柳教车
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发表于 2012-1-16 15:44 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
估计政府人员正抱怨呢, 肯定有人做广告了,怎么这些天竟是中国人发简历要求修改的.
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发表于 2012-1-16 21:02 | 显示全部楼层
That is their job.
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发表于 2012-1-18 19:53 | 显示全部楼层
对,已经等10来天了还没有回.慢工出细活.: P5 {* Y3 v6 Y7 \  ?/ }
谢谢楼主有用信息!
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发表于 2012-2-1 19:27 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
ding!!!!这个帖子帮了我很多。谢谢楼主!!!!!!
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