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I just wrote a poem9 l* E' r$ X* u/ a; U
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
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Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
( X4 k' r: _$ V3 ^* M7 ^ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 8 F* f, z; A8 ]& T$ W# M2 z
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
- [+ u" t: K3 `* T7 [% i/ ?, ], H Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me : Z' \) M$ ^5 _9 N8 o8 p, v
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
: r8 b9 \ I4 |9 y$ J Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
8 ?, n u& d( v# b8 P' n$ X* K8 SHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
) X4 \: q' M2 R- P5 v9 a; _ somehow I realized you were still in my heart 7 l' v. Y& E+ l
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness( H c2 ?8 y! c+ `' j) `, C
somehow I lost myself inside again
, X( @* c) H0 G* ]: t3 kNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
% g3 k0 V E( z0 K& | somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion {. X, `, J: A. G
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
) V+ ~. h' t+ u5 C3 w$ X2 q, Q. bBasically, I almost finish this poem
- F1 u+ e, Z0 p) r3 q7 z% K I am 一个人de精彩
2 x' B0 b v# X! i! V# u" N/ ` I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.7 n8 _: ~* A' N# Y
But........ 4 R: L3 N: Q8 T# f! n+ E+ ]( ~
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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