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I just wrote a poem9 d- u5 h+ Z7 H4 S( |* w7 ~
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.% B: n/ [ a$ O
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
; a# }7 Q* l) t- h5 aThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
% e6 i2 \5 g3 F9 {7 A+ G7 g" p+ r1 u$ i Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 8 y$ P3 f1 ^$ E8 @! P) l
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
, I2 _0 @# J( u7 G3 F! t Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
, e; U) q7 d1 A0 }' g/ y( k Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
( X t: B0 `- _) g8 A$ ] Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
% H0 S3 K% u. ~' J6 V) ?1 q! {However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 0 i, P# G+ m8 O g) a
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
% i7 I* M" x X% ~2 Y somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
K( t4 ]4 @5 @5 J9 [& v1 a4 _3 ?$ I, e somehow I lost myself inside again
+ I: O% u. D Q \Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 5 j5 u3 w" \+ b! D& [6 ?6 `; Z
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
" g/ W, J9 W/ [, R2 J7 a2 V( ?Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
/ [, j+ K! N6 O- x: D* ^' yBasically, I almost finish this poem6 r! m& q( q; T! c% x* E H5 d0 H/ g
I am 一个人de精彩
% R2 N- d2 B& l/ d I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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