儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信
Sample TextSample Text儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:
I reckon that I should not need to remember as muchChinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
The last thing is that I should do less chores.
Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
155 words I reckon that I should not need to remember as muchChinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。
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